One saturday morning my mother wake up me and Pookie early like about 3 am and we lef out 4 . She neva tell we where we did a go but the stop that we come off a di bus say Ewerton. A did so so bush and we did haffi walk through a likkle track fi get to di place. When we go dere we see people a wait and I ask mi mother is where she nuh ansa she jus mumble and say ''people badmine unno haffi get a right chew clearance''. Pookie go in first and then the man mek she go ina nex room and wait pan him, me and mi madda sidung outside and hear Pookie pan one piece a screaming, my mother say ''him good a good man she a clear''. A did my time fi talk to the man afta Pookie come out and the man talk to me and mi mother first and den tell mi man fi go outside. Di man tell mi dat a big corrupted man after mi but mi mus come back and him will mek sure him beat di game fi mi. I never know what him did a talk bout but all I know him give mi mother a indian head ring n tell har fi mek sure mi keep it pan mi ring finger at all times.
It was my madda time fi talk to the man, den him tell har fi meet him ina di same room whey him did mek Pookie did go ina, I neva hear any sound but mi mother come out a smile n say she feel lite. Di man give har a white fowl fi carry home and a bag wid sometings. I neva know what did ina it but when we come out a di track and go pan di bus me did drap asleep and some noise wake mi up. When I open mi eye is di white fowl whey di man give my mother tek it self outa di bag and a fly up and down ina di bus. Mommy did feel shame so she hold har head straight and give me and Pookie di eye fi hold we head straight to. Di people dem say 'yeah man a nex one a Mass Camfah people dem deh pan di bus wid dem obeah fowl'. I close back my eye and pretend like mi still did a sleep.
Mommy did vex say she neva get fi carry home fi white fowl because she say a di fowl she say was to dig up whey dem did plant ina di yawd fi we nuh pass we common entrance.
Me, Pigin Toe, Ballie and Clyde was still a white wash fi di people dem a Headquarters sometime dem all put we pan di van back and drop we off and we white wash down side walk so till dem mek we start check di res a bwaay dem work . Five dolla fi kill. Mi buy Pookie a new bag o books school bag because di one whey she did have she lef sumting ina it and di micee deal wid di side a it and mommy say she neva a buy no more and dem was a call har micelee a school. Mi buy mi two other sister dem two Lone Ranger lunch pan. I all did buy miself a new set a khaki and a set a curtain fi Mommy. Tings did a gwaan good . Ballie tell mi say di man ova di calaloo bed did want we help him pan sunday morning time sell calaloo while him go sell gleaner so I get a nex work.
One Sunday morning we head fromVille go dung a Swallow go pan Watson Ave fi go sell di calaloo and see one a di big man dem from Headquarters pull up and ask we if di calaloo man deh deh. We tell him no him did gone so him ask if di man lef anyting fi him, yes di calaloo man did lef him sum gree ting wrap up ina platic and we hand it to him and him drive off. Right under di bag whey calaloo man lef fi di big man dere was a nex bag wid some more green ting ina it me and Ballie say we a go tek it and try sell it. Ballie say him wudda keep it , I cudden carry it home because my mother nose pick up everyting and this green ting did have a funny kinda smell.
Monday morning we walk a go a school agen and di big man meet we pan Oxford Rd and offer we a ride agen, I show him what me and Ballie have and him eye dem nearly drop out a him head and ask whey we get it and we say ''it a sell'' him ask we how much and we ask him quick quick how much him want to pay because we neva know di price and him quick and say $50. Twenty-five fi me twenty five fi Ballie more goods fi madda stall.
Thursday, November 12, 2009
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wow i THINK i see where this is going... cant wait for pt 4 good read before bed!
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